Emily
Dickinson Museum Poetry Discussion Group
November
8, 2019
Topic:
Dickinson and Robert Browning
Facilitator:
Paraic Finnerty
Paraic.
The topic, really, is Robert Browning, and his creation of dramatic lyric. I
have some definitions here. In the twentieth century these poems became known
as dramatic monologues, but in the nineteenth century they were known as
dramatic lyrics. That's what Robert Browning called them, and I think that's
important to remember, because dramatic monologue is sort of a twentieth
century idea some of Browning's poems fit into and some of them don't
“A
development of the soliloquy, but not written for the stage or forming part of
a play, the dramatic monologue is a poem consisting of a speech by a single
character who reveals his thoughts, character and situation. In the 19th
century, when literature became increasingly preoccupied with the individual
viewpoint, Robert Browning found it an ideal form and Tennyson several times
used it.” from The Cambridge Guide to Literature in English
And,
there's another definition.
“A
poetic form in which the poet invents a character, or, more commonly, uses one
from history or legend, and reflects on life from the character's standpoint.
Tennyson was the first to use the form, taking the standpoint of
characters in Greek myth and causes them to express emotions relevant to their
predicaments. The emotions, however, are really more relevant to those of
Tennyson's own age, but the disguise enables him to express himself without
inhibition, and particularly without involving himself in the responsibility of
having to defend the attitudes that he is expressing (E.g. his monodrama Maud (1855).
However it was Robert Browning who used the form most profusely, and
with whom it is most associated, eg My Last Duchess (1845).
Browning used it differently from Tennyson: his characters are more detached
from his own personality.” From The Bloomsbury Dictionary of English
Literature
I
think Tennyson writes in more contemporary terms, while Browning is more of an
historicist. He gets into the character from that particular point of view.
Just to give you a taste: [ Plays a recording of "My Last Duchess,"
by Robert Browning.
That’s my last
Duchess painted on the wall,
Looking as if
she were alive. I call
That piece a
wonder, now; Fra Pandolf’s hands
Worked busily a
day, and there she stands.
Will’t please
you sit and look at her? I said
“Fra Pandolf” by
design, for never read
Strangers like
you that pictured countenance,
The depth and
passion of its earnest glance,
But to myself
they turned (since none puts by
The curtain I
have drawn for you, but I)
And seemed as
they would ask me, if they durst,
How such a
glance came there; so, not the first
Are you to turn
and ask thus. Sir, ’twas not
Her husband’s
presence only, called that spot
Of joy into the
Duchess’ cheek; perhaps
Fra Pandolf
chanced to say, “Her mantle laps
Over my lady’s
wrist too much,” or “Paint
Must never hope
to reproduce the faint
Half-flush that
dies along her throat.” Such stuff
Was courtesy,
she thought, and cause enough
For calling up
that spot of joy. She had
A heart—how
shall I say?— too soon made glad,
Too easily
impressed; she liked whate’er
She looked on,
and her looks went everywhere.
Sir, ’twas all
one! My favour at her breast,
The dropping of
the daylight in the West,
The bough of
cherries some officious fool
Broke in the
orchard for her, the white mule
She rode with
round the terrace—all and each
Would draw from
her alike the approving speech,
Or blush, at
least. She thanked men—good! but thanked
Somehow—I know
not how—as if she ranked
My gift of a
nine-hundred-years-old name
With anybody’s
gift. Who’d stoop to blame
This sort of
trifling? Even had you skill
In speech—which
I have not—to make your will
Quite clear to
such an one, and say, “Just this
Or that in you
disgusts me; here you miss,
Or there exceed
the mark”—and if she let
Herself be
lessoned so, nor plainly set
Her wits to
yours, forsooth, and made excuse—
E’en then would
be some stooping; and I choose
Never to stoop.
Oh, sir, she smiled, no doubt,
Whene’er I
passed her; but who passed without
Much the same
smile? This grew; I gave commands;
Then all smiles
stopped together. There she stands
As if alive.
Will’t please you rise? We’ll meet
The company
below, then. I repeat,
The Count your
master’s known munificence
Is ample warrant
that no just pretense
Of mine for
dowry will be disallowed;
Though his fair
daughter’s self, as I avowed
At starting, is
my object. Nay, we’ll go
Together down,
sir. Notice Neptune, though,
Taming a
sea-horse, thought a rarity,
Which Claus of Innsbruck
cast in bronze for me!
Paraic.
This is one of Browning's most celebrated dramatic lyrics. What we have is a
sense of a character here, the duke, who's not a very nice man. He's so angry
that his wife acts toward him as she does to everybody else, he has her killed.
And, at the end of the poem, we get the sense that he's talking to a diplomat,
arrangeing a new marriage, obviously, and this is probably not the best
situation to involve this new woman in. This is someone who gives commands, who
will not stoop. This is very much an aristocratic, powerful, nasty, cruel
speaker. And, this poor wife is killed, and I think it's interesting that she
is as if alive in the painting. The painting is a controlled space, not
everybody can see.
So, when Robert Browning talked about what
he was doing, this was quite revolutionary for the nineteenth century, because
a lot of poets were writing from their own perspective and using that lyric
"I" voice, and people were very confused when they started reading
the poems, and they were about mad people and these crazy dukes and these
killers. And so, he had to put an advertisement attached to the lyrics to
explain, "Please, don't assume this is me - don't assume that I'm doing
these awful things to Elizabeth Barrett Browning [laughter]. And remember,
Elizabeth Barrett Browning was a much more famous poet than Robert Browning,
who is really in the end of the 1860's that he comes into his own. Before that,
he's Elizabeth Barrett Browning's husband. So, he called these "dramatic
lyrics," and used the following definition to explain what he was doing.
"though for the most part Lyric in expression,
always dramatic in principle, and so many utterances of so many imaginary
persons, not mine” Prefatory Advertisement to Dramatic Lyrics (1842) Don't worry
about poor Elizabeth Barrett Browning - don't worry [laughter]
But
Tennyson, who's Robert Browning's rival at this time - and in many ways
Tennyson is a much more famous, important poet (He becomes poet lauretate in
1850) - says:
"A dramatic poem," - because
he was also writing them in terms of Maude
and Ulysses, which Dickinson knew -
" and Dramatis Personae are imaginary. Since it is so much the fashion in
these days to regard each poem and story as a story of the poet's life or part
of it, may I not be allowed to remind my readers of the possibility, that some
event which comes to the poet's knowledge, some hint flashed from another mind,
some thought or feeling arising in his own, or some mood coming – he knows not
whence or how – may strike a chord from which a poem evolves its life” (Tennyson, Memoir, 1897, p.329)
So,
there's a clear sense that both Robert Brownining and Tennyson are trying to do
something new. It's not always been totally understood by readers, and Tennyson
starts to move into more personal poems with In Memorium in 1850, and this is the same year he becomes the poet
laureate. But, Robert Browning continues in these dramatic [inaudible]. And, of
course, our friend Emily Dickinson tells Higginson:
“When I state myself, as the Representative of the Verse - it does not
mean - me "
Again, she's echoing Browning. Any collection of
Robert Browning would have had this warning- it does not means me, but a
supposed person.
This is one of her early letters to Higginson, where she's defining herself,
what she's doing. And then she says - and I don't know what this part means -
"You are true, about the 'perfection. Today, makes Yesterday
mean."
I don't know what that means. But then she says:
"You spoke of Pippa Passes - I never heard anybody speak of Pippa
Passes - before. You see my posture is benighted”. (Dickinson to Higginson,
July 1862, L268)
In
one of her earliest letters, she tell him that among her favorite poets are the
Brownings and Keats. So, not knowing Pippa Passes makes her seem as if she's
not as aware of Browning as she should be. Now, what I think we have to think
about is, what did Higginson write to her? Now Higginson, from the 1840's is
one of the great promoters of Browning. The Americans are the first to read and
recognize the importance of Robert Browning, as they are first to recognize the
importance of someone like Tennyson. So there's a sense that Higginson knows
Browning. Higginson would have read Browning, and I think that when she tells
him that she loves the Brownings, I think he starts to talk to her a little bit
about Browning, and I think he mentions Pippa Passes, but Pippa Passes is a
very odd poem. It centers on this figure, Pippa Passes, who, on her one day off
from work, she sings. And she goes around her town of Oslo, and sings. And as
she sings, the various characters, who are not very nice - we've got adultery,
murder, political intrigfue - her song echoes the idea of God is in his heave,
all's right with the world. This is one of Browning's famous lines, and Pippa
sings this, and that's the same moment that this couple, who are a bit like
MacBeth and Lady MacBeth, are probably going to kill each other - or committ
suicide, because they have just organized the murder of the husband - they're
in an adulterous relationship.
So, I think that one of the important
books, that hasn't gotten enough recognition, in terms of Dickinson, is Men and Women. This is Robert Browning's
very important collection, where he offers many different dramatic lyrics from
the perspective of both men and women. There's a copy of it in the Frost
Library - Dickinson's copy is down there. There are a couple of marks on some
of the poems. In 1871 Dickinson told Higginson, "This is a broad
book," and in her later life, she quotes from five of these poems. That's
more - as far as I know - than from any other collection. Now, you might say
that My Last Duchess isn't very much
like anything Dickinson wrote, and I think there are two types of dramatic
lyrics. One type that Robert Browning uses will be spoken by a main character,
as in the Duke. Often these are historical poems, and the character will
describe at length his or her present or past life. However, there's another
type of poem, where we don't have a character's name, but rather, we have a
figure, in this case a woman, who's describing a particular situation - so, a
lot closer to what Dickinson would write. I'll just read this one quickly.
"A Woman's Last Word" from Men
and Women.
Let's contend no more, Love,
Strive nor weep:
All be as before, Love,
---Only sleep!
What so wild as words are?
I and thou
In debate, as birds are,
Hawk on bough!
See the creature stalking
While we speak!
Hush and hide the talking,
Cheek on cheek!
What so false as truth is,
False to thee?
Where the serpent's tooth is
Shun the tree---
Where the apple reddens
Never pry---
Lest we lose our Edens,
Eve and I.
All be as before, Love,
---Only sleep!
What so wild as words are?
I and thou
In debate, as birds are,
Hawk on bough!
See the creature stalking
While we speak!
Hush and hide the talking,
Cheek on cheek!
What so false as truth is,
False to thee?
Where the serpent's tooth is
Shun the tree---
Where the apple reddens
Never pry---
Lest we lose our Edens,
Eve and I.
Teach me, only teach, Love
As I ought
I will speak thy speech, Love,
Think thy thought---
Meet, if thou require it,
Both demands,
Laying flesh and spirit
In thy hands.
That shall be to-morrow
Not to-night:
I must bury sorrow
Out of sight:
Must a little weep, Love,
(Foolish me!)
And so fall asleep, Love,
Loved by thee.
Both demands,
Laying flesh and spirit
In thy hands.
That shall be to-morrow
Not to-night:
I must bury sorrow
Out of sight:
Must a little weep, Love,
(Foolish me!)
And so fall asleep, Love,
Loved by thee.
Now, I think this is a
fascinating poem for a man to write - from the perspective opf a woman, the
idea that tomorrow, there will be the compliant, tomorrow there will be the
supliant figure, tomorrow the woman will align her thoughts, her speech, with husband.
This is a moment of different possibilities, where the wife isn't necessarily
compliant, isn't particularly happy. Here we have a divided speaker. The woman
on the surface, and in the day world is responding to her husband as she has
been required to do in the nineteenth century. But this is a nice world moment,
where she's reflecting on that. It's a performance; it's not really her, She's
got a script. So, this brings up that doubleness. On one level Robert Browning
is asking us to consider, who is this characer? Where are they speaking? What's
the occasion? And, what's the difference between what the character says, and
what the character means - what the character says, and what the poem means. I
think it's that sense of women's divided consciousness. On the one level,
having to conform to the conventions of being a wife, a woman, and at the same
time, having all of these different possibilities, that aren't, somehow,
permitted at this time. Robert Browning. in this poem, is capturing this. I
guess he's expecting his reader to have to navigate between these two
possibilities. He's asking what the character is.
So, as we dive into the
Dickinson poems, what I'd ask is to considerL
•
Who is the
speaker?
•
What is the
speaker’s situation?
•
What is the occasion
of the poem?
•
What does the
speaker (inadvertently) reveal about themselves?
•
Can we
distinguish between what the speaker says and what the poem (or poet) means?
We're
used to thinking of Dickinson either writing about herself, or using a persona.
What I'm asking is, does Dickinson sometimes create a speaker that she doesn't
like - that she doesn't want us to like? Is she asking us, following on from Browning,
whom she said she loved, following on from the fact she says she creates these
supposed persons, is it not possible, that given all of that we may read some
of her poems as creating characters that she may not like - that she doesn't
want us to like.
Shall
we start with the letter to Higginson, maybe? [http://archive.emilydickinson.org/correspondence/higginson/l261.html]
Jule.
If she wrote poems as a "supposed person," might we carry that over
to the letters also?
Paraic.
That's a good poinr, and I guess we could begin to think of Higginson's letter
in that way. She's constructing a particular image of herself. I'll just say, I
don't think this will work for every poem. It's just about thinking about the
poem in a different way. Some poems, that are sometimes problematric, maybe for
a representation of race for example. Well, what if this is not about
Dickinson's issues, let's say, with race, but rather about Dickinson
constructing a speaker that she doesn't want us to like. And, some of the other
poems I've picked, for example, What soft
cherubic Creatures. You could argue quite a problematic representation of
women, particularly the line One would as
soon assault a Plush/ Or violate a
Star. Is Dicksinson a person who wants women to be assaulted? - rather than
thinking that Dickinson is criticizing a particular type of femininity that's
being promoted. Well, what if we think that this speaker that she has creater,
she doesn't necessarily have to agree with - that she doesn't necessarily like.
And, she doesn't want us to think that a woman, just because she's soft and
seeming like an angel, that's an invitation to have this woman violated. From
what I know about Dickinson, I don't think Dickinson would. I've deviated from
your question about the letters, but I guess we could. Think about whom she is
speakin to, and how she's constructing herself.
Greg
M. Her brother, Austin, said of her letters, especially those to Colonel
Higginson, that she definitely posed in those letters.
Paraic.
And that's interesting where she says, "You see my posture is
benighted" [L268] in that letter.
Polly.
It's also exemplifying a stance, and then investigating what that's like,
inviting the reader to do the same.
Paraic.
Yes, and Robert Browning was criticized in Britain. They didn't like him.
Americans lover him. He was more popular in America. I think America liked that
challenge. Browning would often talk about, in his writings, readers
collaborating with him - co-authoring with him. He's obscure because he wants
the reader to participate. So perhaps Robert Browning offered Dickinson the
idea of a productive obscurity, and the idea of co-creating that you're talkin
about. And Americans liked that. They didn't want to be told, Oh, this is what
the poem meant, this is the genre. They wanted to engage with Robert Browning,
and the Robert Browning societies that came up and were established in the
1870's were often in America, Higginson was one of the founders of the Boston
Browning Society. Many of his essays focused on how popular - he talks about
the way Margaret Fuller loved Robert Browning. He talks about how they in the
transcendental circle like Robert Browning, for the very reason you're saying;
they gave readers a chance to engage with the language. That's why the British
didn't like it - that he was breaking th rules, and Americans appreciated this
rule-breaker. Of course, they could see themselves as kind of similar
rule-breakers. I think that's an excellent point.
Melba.
The idea of the [inaudible] in the poems, of who's the speaker in the poems,
and what's the situation - what's the world that's being created, gives me
another way to read this statement in the letter, "My business is
circumference—An ignorance, not of
Customs, but if caught with the Dawn—or the Sunset see me—Myself the only
Kangaroo among the Beauty." And,
that's a little bit hard to assemble a meaning for, but your idea raises
the possibility that she's just leaping to the periphery of herself, or of an
attitude, or a situation, and then, sitting to the circumference, she gets a
look from a different perspective, and then she fleshes that out into a world,
and she understands that's not the usual process. That's not according to
custom. But I've always wondered, what is the significance of the kangaroo?
That ability to just take this huge leap to another spot in this surprising and
stunning way. It just appeals to me.
Paraic. I love what you've just said, and it
also fits into the earlier part of the letter, when she refuses to give him a
portrait. That would be a physical likeness of herself. What she offers instead
is a description - a textual image of herself, much more vague and unclear - so
that would fit in with that idea that language allows a flexibility that the
visual makes more concrete.
[interlude]
Paraic. I would add just one thing. What's
interesting here for me is, Dickinson is the nobody. Higginson is the famous
writer. This is a reverse, because normally, it's the fan who asks for the
famous person to give a portrait. This is the age of celebrity. This is what
people did. Emerson would send Carlyle his portrait, and Carlyle would return.
So, it's interesting - Higginson, the famous person, asks for her portrait -
she says no, I'll just give you a textual. It would be something like Beyonce
asking me,"Oh, could I have a portrait of you?" [laughter] But it is,
because Thomas Wentworth Higginson is a very important man - a famous essayist,
connected with the Atlantic Monthly.
Jule. The question is, why does he want her
portrait?
Paraic. Because he wants to make her real. I
think, as a concretizer, to make her that he knows that she exists. She doesn't
want to be fixed, I think, in that way, and I think this follows on from the idea
of Browning. Browning, in his messages about what he's doing, he says, I'm
creating imaginary people. I don't want you to talk about me. Don't think that
I'm doing these things. So I think that it's interesting. She's saying, these
poems aren't bout me, they're about supposed persons - I'm doing it too.
[ Interlude ]
The first poems I chose are four poems that
she sent to Higginson, either after or before she tells him that when she
speaks it is a supposed person. She's testing this man who knows about
Browning, about Pippa Passes, who perhaps told her about his work to establish
Browning's reputation, and then she send him these four poems. Now, if I were
Higginson, and I get these poems, and I've been told by her that she's created
a person - this is not me - this is the test. Now I'm asking you whether these
poems work. I think the first two are more challenging for us: Your Riches
taught me Poverty, There came a Day at Summer full. We know that Your
Riches taught me Poverty was sent to Sue, and she said, "You see, I
remembered." And, There came a Day at Summer full has been read
alot as sort of a bridal poem. The others would be Before I got my eye put
out and I cannot dance upon my Toes.
Burleigh reads.
Before I got my eye put out
Before I got my eye put out
I liked as well
to see—
As other
Creatures, that have Eyes
And know no
other way—
But were it told
to me—Today—
That I might
have the sky
For mine—I tell
you that my Heart
Would split, for
size of me—
The
Meadows—mine—
The
Mountains—mine—
All Forests—Stintless
Stars—
As much of Noon
as I could take
Between my
finite eyes—
The Motions of
the Dipping Birds—
The Morning's
Amber Road—
For mine—to look
at when I liked—
The News would
strike me dead—
So
safer—guess—with just my soul
Upon the Window
pane—
Where other
Creatures put their eyes—
Incautious—of
the Sun—
-J327/Fr336/M177
[ To hear this poem read aloud, go to https://youtu.be/wyXV71lZ3UE ]
Paraic. You've
got your own reading, but, just to remind you, who's the speaker? What is the
speaker's situation? What is the occasion of the poem? What does the speaker
inadvertently reveal about him or herself? And, can we distinguish what the
speaker says and what the poem might mean? These are the questions if we're
interested in thinking about this in a Browning way.
Nancy. Not
pertaining to what you just said [laughter], I thought it was interesting that
in the first line, eye is singular,
and that if you have one eye put out you lose depth and perspecive.
Paraic.
Dickinson loved Shakespeare - King Lear, who lost his eyes. Not to bully you
into a readingbut, it's a horrible scene. Reading it's awful, seeing it staged
is awful. Having your eye put out is quite interesting if you're thinking about
character.
Despina. What
about Oedipus?
Paraic. Oedipus,
yes.
Greg D.. What
you were saying about the horror - the poem skips right over that part - leaves
it behind and goes right on to the next - the intellectual stage.
Paraic. This is
brilliant. Yes, that's true, isn't it?
Greg D.. I often
see this as not a dramatic situation, but as a character. It's some kind of a
personal, perceptual or psychological situation within her. Having her eye put
out is, maybe, having the way she saw things no longer available. It's like she
can't see something the same way at all anymore.
Don. The Blakean infinite eye, I think, is also interesting. One of her
finite eyes, her finite vision, she's transcended that, and she looked through
the infinite eye, like Blake. So, she is differentiating herself from other
creatures. It's interesting - it runs through all her poems. One one hand she
has this wonderful contact with the world, and then there's the other side, the
transcendental side, and she sort of tries to bring the two together.
Paraic. It's quite different from Emerson's
"transparent eyeball," isn't it? [general agreement]
Melba. I'm not that familiar with Blake, but she does contrast the
typical eye that I think she starts out with, and then at the end of the poem,
she says, it's safer to put my soul on the window pane. And so, I'm trying to
determine why [inaudible] and the initial confusion to me was that the actual
eye confused her, and that she thought seeing something was the same as
possessing it, because she goes through The
Meadows—mine—/ The Mountains—mine—; that's the
finite eye, but somehow the speaker comes to the conclusion that it's safer to
see differently - with the soul. And, all I can get so far is that it avoids
some kind of deception - that she experienced previously.
Greg M. Well,
the metaphor for what she's safer from is the brightness of the sun, looking
into the sun. So it's something like that, if it's anything at all.
Clare. It
reminds me of the line "Too bright for our infirm Delight/ The Truth's
superb surprise.
Paraic. This
might be a leap that you might not want to take, but, if we go with the
Browning idea, to what extend is Dickinson presenting us with a certain type of
character? If I was Higginson, and I get a letter; I don't write about myself -
a "supposed person," etc. The next letter comes through - two lovely
poems - so these are her supposed persons. Who are these people? She's defying
him. These are not about me. Now you see, we can interpret them as we wish, but
she's actually asking him. If this is one of her supposed people, who is this
person?
Greg M. Maybe
it's someone who's not a poet, who doesn't have the gift. She has The meadow, she has The mountains, she has the Sky,
so this is someone who doesn't.
Paraic. OK.
That's interesting - because, again, the poem also has a divided speaker. At
some stage they possess these things, and then they somehow lost them. Browning
is very interested in characters. Remember the woman who, on one level,
performs the duties of wife, but yet, Browning hints at all these other
possibilities that are there. So, is this similarly a Browning-like supposed
person, who's offering us both? What it was like to see and possess, and then,
in some way, to think that maybe that's not the right way?
Clare. The
duality.
Paraic. The
duality, yes. I'm only testing. You can say "You're wrong, you're wrong!?
I'm just saying, if you were Higginson, and this is what she's told you, you
either ignore her -
Brooke. I've
always been aware in Dickinson - she's telling you "I can't do this thing,
I can't see the thing, I can't feel the thing, I can't dance that way,"
and then going on and doing it anyway, = right? - for the majority of the poem,
in descriptive, gorgeous, sparkling language. And there's kind of a power in
that.
Clare. I wonder
if it exemplifies her internal process when, "I can't do this, and I can't
do this," because sometimes when you express that, you go on and you're
able to do it. There's greater congruence between your inside and what you're
able to transcend.
Everett. It's
like when somebody's about to give a speech, and they say, "I'm really
nervous." Then, they relax.
Paraic. But, to
go back, what Dickinson is doing, and what I think is her real power as a poet,
is that complexity of psychology that Brooke just mentioned - that kind of
doing/ not doing. And yet, somehow fusing those together in a consciousness, or
psychology - a voice.
Brooke. It makes
me think of her posture in the letter that we just looked at. "I'm your
scholar - you're going to be my preceptor - and then WHOA! [laughter]. It's a
little bit of that same posture to me.
Greg D. And your
question - what type of person is this? You can come up with some attributes;
I'm not sure if you can come up with a character. It seems that it's someone
who has suffered a huge loss, right? And the rest of the poem is sort of like,
what if - even though I have suffered this loss, what if it were told to me
today that I could actually return, but even with more intensity of experience
than I had before. So, you sort of build out the character through attributes,
or character, or imagined dramatic situations. I don't know how you could apply
that - you call it Brownian ...
Paraic. I like
what you just said. That loss, and then whether you would not want that loss,
looking back.
Greg D. Right,
or that somehow that loss transformed you. But, it's hard to say exactly who
the character is. I mean, I can't imagine [inaudible].
Paraic. Yes. I
think, in My Last Duchess, there's a
character. But in the other poem, [A Woman's Last word, https://allpoetry.com/A-Woman%27s-Last-Word
] we just
find out about her divided consciousness. Right, I don't think Dickinson tends
to write like My Last Duchess, where
there's a character, though, when we get to The
Malay took the Pearl, we can think about that. I think it's more like A Woman's Last Word - that same trying
to create - I think you used the word fractured.
Greg D.
Different fragments, or whatever.
[interlude]
Melba. If we
could take more seriously this line in her letter [http://archive.emilydickinson.org/correspondence/higginson/l268.html]: "Sir, if you please, it afflicts me, and I thought that
instruction would take it away." It's as if there's some kind of
vision, or experience of the world - some sight - that Dickinson's putting on
the line by taking instruction from Higginson. I guess this poem is making me
wonder if this is more fraught than I initially thought, because she's seeking
someone else's help.
Paraic. To
develop that, if we think about Higginson trying to correct her, trying to get
her to be normal.
Melba. Not to be
"spasmodic."
Paraic. Not to
be spasmodic. Browning was one of the spasmodics. Tennyson was one of the
spasmodics. Aurora Leigh is one of the spasmodics. So to call her spasmodic -
Dickinson's probably thinking, well, these are people that I love. [laughter]
But, I think what you're saying is to correct her gait - to make her
able-bodied - to make her see as others do. In some way, if we read the letter
linked to this poem - she's coosing; I would rather have lost that way of
seeing than the way I see.
Judith. Because,
it's not about disability, it's about different ability.
Melba. But when
the speaker gets to the fifth stanza, So
safer—guess—with just my soul/ Upon the Window pane—, it sounds like one of
those regretful conclusions of ageing. "But." There does seem to be a
sense of loss.
Brooke. And
then, some sort of appreciation, that has depth, that follows, right? A small
resolve of some sort?
Melba. OK,
that's a good point.
Susan. She wrote
this, supposedly, in 1862, and it's two years later that her eye trouble is so
severe that she really had to endure a lot of pain, a lot of darkness, and
whether the signs of that were beginning, I don't know.
Paraic. Would it
be OK to move on to the next poem?
Greg M. reads.
I cannot dance upon my Toes —
I cannot dance upon my Toes —
No Man
instructed me —
But oftentimes,
among my mind,
A Glee
possesseth me,
That had I
Ballet knowledge —
Would put itself
abroad
In Pirouette to
blanch a Troupe —
Or lay a Prima,
mad,
And though I had
no Gown of Gauze —
No Ringlet, to
my Hair,
Nor hopped to
Audiences — like Birds,
One Claw upon
the Air,
Nor tossed my
shape in Eider Balls,
Nor rolled on
wheels of snow
Till I was out
of sight, in sound,
The House encore
me so —
Nor any know I
know the Art
I mention — easy
— Here —
Nor any Placard
boast me —
It's full as Opera —
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Paraic. Now again, you're Higginson. You've got this letter
- "supposed person" ...
Jule. All he wanted was a picture. [ laughter ]
Greg M. Well, she confesses at the end that she has an Art that's full as Opera. That must have intrigued him. That's quite a claim
to make.
Paraic. It is, even though ther Placards don't boast her;
nobody knows about her.
Clare. Also her claim that she can't dance upon her toes
because no guy taught her. It's such a wonderful assertion to begin with,
right?
Paraic. Right - to the man she's asking to teach her.
Susan. It's such a wonderful description of what dancers do
... she does a perfect pirhouette in here
Paraic. And for me, the line, The House encore me so - She's imagining the applause. She's
imagining all these people thinking, "How Wonderful! Come out again! Dance
again!" It's one of the great poems - this is about somebody imagining
what it would be like. You've got all these younger people today who want to be
famous. [inaudible] There's something in this, and yet, she's not. It's her
imagining that.
Greg D. For me that's the Art - Nor any know I know the Art. That's the art that she's
mentioning here. She mentions it just briefly here, but she mentions it
significantly. To me, it's dancing in the mind. I cannot dance upon my Toes, but, in my mind.
Clare. And then, the poem is a dance, right? Watch this!
Look at this!
Greg D. It's a demonstration.
Burleigh. In both of these poems, she's imagining she can
see; she's imagining she can dance, and in the end, returning to a sacred
position.
Paraic. I really want to get your opinion on some of the
later poems, so, shall we move to the next?
Greg D. reads.
Your Riches—taught me—Poverty.
Your Riches—taught me—Poverty.
Myself—a Millionaire
In little Wealths, as Girls could
boast
Till broad as Buenos Ayre—
You drifted your Dominions—
A Different Peru—
And I esteemed All Poverty
For Life's Estate with you—
Of Mines, I little know—myself—
But just the names, of Gems—
The Colors of the Commonest—
And scarce of Diadems—
So much, that did I meet the Queen—
Her Glory I should know—
But this, must be a different
Wealth—
To miss it—beggars so—
I'm sure 'tis India—all Day—
To those who look on You—
Without a stint—without a blame,
Might I—but be the Jew—
I'm sure it is Golconda—
Beyond my power to deem—
To have a smile for Mine—each Day,
How better, than a Gem!
At least, it solaces to know
That there exists—a Gold—
Altho' I prove it, just in time
Its distance—to behold—
Its far—far Treasure to surmise—
And estimate the Pearl—
That slipped my simple fingers
through—
While just a Girl at School.
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Polly. What's Golconda
Greg M. It's a diamond mine in South America
Paraic. There's a danger of reading this as being about Sue,
but remember, Higginson doesn't know this, and this is supposed to be about a
supposed person. I'm just saying that this is another way of reading the poem
that Higginson is being encouraged to have.
Brooke. If she's having it both ways, and if she sends it to
somebody assuming it isn't necessarily herself, then she gets to engage with
that person and is actually craft and practice the consciousness around this
poem poem as also being a persona of someone else, right? It's a construct that
she chooses to do, unbenownst to him - and he doesn't have to.
Paraic. She's also taking the reader on a kind of global
journey between one location and another. She's got the Jew there as well, to
bring in another context.
Melba. What I see - the difference between what Browning is
doing in My Last Duchess, he was
creating a persona that exists in the poem fully formed for the duration of
that poem, and Dickinson creates at least two personas, a past an a present,
and somehow the poems are short enough that you manage to get both in view. You
can hold both in your head, at least for a brief period. They coexist, and the
[inaudible] is somewhat different. So, I guess there's persona potential in
here that sort of moves in and out of focus.
Paraic. Just to play devil's advocate, though, with the
Browning poem it's a particular type of speaker, who dosn't "stoop,"
who's quite arrogant, who's quite proud, and does deal with the past - "my
last duchess," and the future - the new duchess. What I really like about
what you said is that Dickinson's speaker - assuming that it's not her for a
second - is also doing that. She's got a past - she's thinking about a complex
consciousness, and here.
Susan. There's a bitterness about this poem. "I've
missed something." She never really tells us what it is. Is it a
particular relationship, or love for a particular person, or whatever. But, I prove it, just in time/ Its distance - to
behold, is really difficult. And then, Its
far—far Treasure to surmise - to know, not to have. And, estimate the Pearl. "I can'e even
tell you what it is I've lost - or never had, and I'm different, because I
don't have it.
Greg M. If I'm Higginson, and I'm reading this, this is definitely
a poem about loss, and it's probably something I must have experienced in my
life at some point, as every one of us can, and, if we read it as a poem about
loss, and not about a specific thing, or incident, or person, we can relat to
it better, because now it becomes about our own experience. She writes, "I
had a guinea golden/ I lost it in the sand." It's a similiar poem. It's
something we can all relate to - even if we don't know who wrote this.
Greg D. The second person also makes it more real. It's a
real person. It feels that way, rather than just a meditation about loss.
Greg. Yes, Yes, it does.
Paraic. I really want to get on to this next one.
Susan reads.
What Soft—Cherubic Creatures—
These Gentlewomen are—
One would as soon assault a Plush—
Or violate a Star—
Such Dimity Convictions—
A Horror so refined
Of freckled Human Nature—
Of Deity—ashamed—
It's such a common—Glory—
A Fisherman's—Degree—
Redemption—Brittle Lady—
Be so—ashamed of Thee—
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Paraic. This is a hard one, that's why I picked it. I mean
the speaker, here. Is this someone that Dickinson likes? If you go with me on
the Browning thing, maybe this is someone Dickinson doesn't. There's a few
levels here. There's Dickinson. There's the women that are being described, and
there's the speaker. Dickinson may agree on some level on some aspects of these
women, but does she really agree with the speaker? :That One would as soon assault a Plush—
/ Or violate a Star?
Greg M. Well, these are two things we would not want to do,
and that is her attitude in this verse, right?
Brooke. But, it's a little disturbing that in the first
verse about these Soft Cherubic Creatures
that she's thinking about violiating them.
Don. Well, certainly here the Plush and the Star are
ironic. The women described here are superficial, arrogant, polite society
women who are dressed to the nines, and they are not Plush, they are not Stars.
Greg M. I think we know that Dickinson did not suffer fools
gladly. She saw shallowness in people. She recognized it, and so I think the
speaker of this poem is someone whom she could have aligned herself very
easily.
Brooke. About the word Dimity.
I'm familiar with the light cotten fabric, but, according to the lexicon, it can
also mean "Weak in argument," which is really interesting, as rather
further kind of maligning them.
Greg M. Could :Redemption
be a reference to the Day of Judgement - whether we are redeemed or not? Could Fisherman be an allusion to the
apostles? Some of them were fishermen.
Polly. But the line, Of
Deity ashamed - I'd like someone to explain that.
Greg M. God is in human nature, and if you're looking down
on other people, you're looking down on God's creations?
Polly. I see. But, she's looking down on these brittle
ladies, isn't she?
Greg M. Exactly! She contradicts herself!
Polly. I don't think it's contradiction so much as -
Greg M. She's doing in the poem what she's accusing others
of doing.
Paraic. I really like what you just said, because this is
the kind of Browning esthetic idea -that contradiction. So it would be
Dickinson the artist creating as speaker who's saying something and
contradicting that message, as you just said, that she shouldn't judge.
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